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  • Joe, I think the title is okay but not strong enough to distinguish it from other spider adventures. Similarly the background and summary doesn't grab the reader. From a publisher standpoint I want a pitch to communicate this is a must have adventur…
    in Into the Widow's Web - Joe Kondrak Comment by rfvrpg July 2018
  • Hello Matt,  I had a hard time connecting with this adventure. Here are a few things I would like to see differently from a publisher standpoint. A title that is easier to recognize or rolls off the tongue well. The adventure summary and hooks need …
    in The Argenhall Apostasy - Matt Roth Comment by rfvrpg July 2018
  • Nathan, this adventure really grabbed me. Perhaps it is the fey and horror theme woven with tragic loss and desperation. I absolutely love the title and the summary is fantastic. From a publisher standpoint those are strong features to help it sell …
    in The Woe in Wealwood - Nathan Ross Comment by rfvrpg July 2018
  • Nicholas, well done. The hook is fantastic drawing readers into this mystery with horror overtones and impending doom. From a publisher standpoint a strong hook and adventure summary can be crucial especially for new authors. The title is easy to pr…
    in The Skinfin Murders - Nicholas Hite Comment by rfvrpg July 2018