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  • Good item with a clear theme, well done! It looks like Kate and I had similar concerns: the DC is pretty low given the item's cost and effect. Maybe lower the duration of the blindness/deafness and up the DC, perhaps preserving the permanent blindn…
    in Elysian Harp Comment by andrewm June 2018
  • Love the description! I agree on streamlining the mechanics for ease of use, like a set duration rather than d6 rounds, but totally sympathize—I frequently do similar things in my own writing! I also think activation using something other than a fr…
    in Skitterstep Boots Comment by andrewm June 2018
  • This is a cool item, and the scapegoat aspect really elevates it! Good work on covering corner cases (divination, copies' magical auras, etc.) A few small things not touched on by the judges: You specify they can be made in sets of up to seven—why…
    in Pockets of Passing Comment by andrewm June 2018